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As prophesized, the apocalypse came, at the peak of civilization, raining fire upon the earth, destroying all manner of life. Though a few survived the massive tragedy, it was not without loss. The earth echoed with the cries of those consumed in the fires, annihilated from all existence. But there was a thin flicker hope in this sea of darkness. Life began anew; creatures only in your imagination began to form and flourished in this newly created world. On this pure untainted earth, evil began to cultivate. There were those among the creatures, who wished for redemption, to take back what was so wrongly snatched away. For their revenge they needed a face to this dark monster, and they soon found it in the humans, blaming their ignorance for the destruction of earth, and so the war began.
The world has rebuilt itself, though not as it was before. Things are much more primitive, not complex. The secrets of technology are hidden, locked away in the palace of the pure lord and lady. Thorgrim is constantly trying to retrieve these documents, so they may once again return the world to its original form. But Hjalti will not allow such secrets to be revealed. So in the fight to create the perfect civilization, they are also fighting the very fabric of society today. Those who wish to keep things, as they are in present, and those who want to return to the old ways of life.
During the "rebuilding" period, the time the earth healed the wounds of the "Great Fire", creatures only in your imagination took root and grew. Horrific beasts and majestic creatures now roam the world. There are four continents, Hjalti, land of the sea, home to the Light legion; it is a network of islands, lagoons and beaches. Syrkar, lands of the desert, here only the strongest survive this vast never-ending desert. Ilya, lands of the ice, this barren snowy plain is home to the some of the purest creature. Thorgrim, lands of the dark legion, here all who follow the path of malevolence reside, and the last is Magnild, lands of the forest, here some of the greatest secrets of redemption are kept. Together they make up the great Redemption, a world filled with mystery, betrayal, and suspicions, will you be able to survive, or perish along with the many before you?
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Faylinn|Calista
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Faylinn:: Elder Witch|Calista:: Lady of Thorgrim
Joined: May 2005
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Location: Thorgrim
Within the palace walls
« Thread Started on Jul 15, 2005, 8:08pm »
The soft rustle of crimson silk could be heard echoing down the empty halls of Arshavir. Callie walked mindlessly forward, honey brown eyes cast downward, corn silk blonde hair swept up into an intricate coifferre (sp?). Heaving a sigh, she pushed open a heavy wooden door, and stepped out into the morning sunshine. The garden was quiet, not a sound seeped through the thick stone walls. How she wanted to destroy them, brick by brick, stone by stone, tear the walls of containmant down.
Sinking to a concrete bench, she plucked an apple from a tree, rolling it over and over in her delicate hands. Ever since the death of her father, she hadn't been able to set foot outside the castle walls. She yearned to ride recklessly at midnight, visit the neighboring lands. Anything would have been good right about now. Throwing the apple away, she stood, and in an instant, a large hawk sat where she had once stood. Lifting from the ground, Callie flew over the walls. There would be hell to pay, but she'd deal with that later.
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