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As prophesized, the apocalypse came, at the peak of civilization, raining fire upon the earth, destroying all manner of life. Though a few survived the massive tragedy, it was not without loss. The earth echoed with the cries of those consumed in the fires, annihilated from all existence. But there was a thin flicker hope in this sea of darkness. Life began anew; creatures only in your imagination began to form and flourished in this newly created world. On this pure untainted earth, evil began to cultivate. There were those among the creatures, who wished for redemption, to take back what was so wrongly snatched away. For their revenge they needed a face to this dark monster, and they soon found it in the humans, blaming their ignorance for the destruction of earth, and so the war began.

The world has rebuilt itself, though not as it was before. Things are much more primitive, not complex. The secrets of technology are hidden, locked away in the palace of the pure lord and lady. Thorgrim is constantly trying to retrieve these documents, so they may once again return the world to its original form. But Hjalti will not allow such secrets to be revealed. So in the fight to create the perfect civilization, they are also fighting the very fabric of society today. Those who wish to keep things, as they are in present, and those who want to return to the old ways of life.

During the "rebuilding" period, the time the earth healed the wounds of the "Great Fire", creatures only in your imagination took root and grew. Horrific beasts and majestic creatures now roam the world. There are four continents, Hjalti, land of the sea, home to the Light legion; it is a network of islands, lagoons and beaches. Syrkar, lands of the desert, here only the strongest survive this vast never-ending desert. Ilya, lands of the ice, this barren snowy plain is home to the some of the purest creature. Thorgrim, lands of the dark legion, here all who follow the path of malevolence reside, and the last is Magnild, lands of the forest, here some of the greatest secrets of redemption are kept. Together they make up the great Redemption, a world filled with mystery, betrayal, and suspicions, will you be able to survive, or perish along with the many before you?

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Redemption :: Hjalti- Land of the Sea, the light legions :: Eztebe Lagoon :: .::Curiosity::.

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Zephyria
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.::Curiosity::.
« Thread Started on Jul 27, 2005, 3:36pm »

Sun burst through the clouds, falling 'pon the quiet land. The rays seemed to find its way through forage and wood, falling 'pon 'er silken folded wings. There was an eerie silence as her canvas moved like a spirit, so silent and peaceful. Dried leaves 'pon the ground were rustled as 'er mane and tail drug the ground. 'er canvas halted as she reached a land of which had not sparked 'er memory. A zephyr blew, rustling the feathers 'pon 'er wings and hooves. 'er sky blue orbs scanning the land before 'er, and 'er curiosity sparked within. A snort escaped 'er quivering nares as 'er tendrils carried 'er from the wood onto a small grass covered cliff. Standing by the edge, the beautiful creature overlooked the village and other strange places 'pon the land. To 'er right lay the calm sea, reflecting the clear sky above. 'er front tendrils left the stone earth as she reared, thrashing muscular legs in the air. 'er horn glowed slightly as from 'er crown escaped such a mystic and beautiful sound, a strong wind blew valiantly through the land. Suddenly from the calm ocean came a beautiful waves, from which came a group of dolphins. Satisfied, 'er voice quieted as she whipped 'er tail, slapping the stone beneath 'er. Feeling comfortable with 'er surroundings, she outstretched 'her valiant black wings, creating a shade on the ground far below. After a moment she folded the silky wings to their natural state at 'er side. Taking a deep breath through her nares, she continued staring out over the land below.

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Faylinn|Calista
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Re: .::Curiosity::.
« Reply #1 on Jul 27, 2005, 7:20pm »

The witch appeared beside the figure of the winged equine.

Welcome to my lagoon, I see you have found me, can I help you?

Faylinn said softly, not wanting to frighten the beautiful creature.

((eep, compared to that awesome post mine's crap...great thread!! Sorry, i've lost my muse...tehe))

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« Reply #2 on Jul 28, 2005, 12:12am »

(lol, thanks! Yea, I understand...I made a seven word post on one site before...lol. )

A quick breath was drawn through 'er nares as the witch appeared in 'er presance. 'er canvas backed a step, 'er beautiful crown high. Feeling calm once more, she orbed over the witch with curiosity. 'er neck fell into an arch as she outstretched a tendril before 'er, bowing to Faylinn. 'er ebony crown to its normal proud state, she decided to speak 'pon a rare occasion.

I was merely passing through when I came 'pon this fine land. I had hoped I would not be an intrusion.

'er voice, so mystic as to halt the chirping of birds 'round them, yet so lithe and lenient.

I am Zephyria.

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Re: .::Curiosity::.
« Reply #3 on Jul 29, 2005, 5:33pm »

Smiling, Fay shook her head.

Not at all, a lovely creature as yourself could never be an intrusion. You are welcome upon my lands.

She smiled warmly.

So m'dear, how is the world byond my borders faring?

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Re: .::Curiosity::.
« Reply #4 on Aug 1, 2005, 10:46pm »

It will linger..

A mystic laugh escaped 'er throat as she nodded her elegant crown, 'er mane rolling in glistening waves.

It is quiet nice, actually, as is yours.

A flame glistened in 'er orbs as she felt her father's blood suddenly race through 'er, but she had learned to control 'er moments. Instead she merely sighed and stretched 'er great wings, creating a shade over both of them before she folded them delicately at 'er sides.

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